chaosflame

I suppose I'll start from the top and work my way down. So to begin, the writing quality is phenomenal in practically every aspect, very few or no spelling errors each chapter, the grammar is clean enough to read with little to no effort needed to understand the meaning and your dialog is well written, my only issue in that area is that Gaia needs something to distinguish that she's talking. The story is developing well and the premises you've started have promise. The character design is immaculate, each character feels real and has their own personality. The update stability is great, a chapter every other day keeps the readers interested but keeps the story suspenseful. Last but not least, the world background, while not original, seems like it will have a bit of a fresh twist to it. To finish this off I would also like to say that I thoroughly enjoy your form of writing!

I'd like to remind you he's 11

...anyone else reading these two's conversation like nail talking to piccolo in dbz abridged?

"features: a guy who never rapes" yep I'm into that, best novel 2021 ........................................................................

doesn't he know he's the protagonist?

the answer is never

this was so true milkyone had to say it 3 times😆

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