At the beginning and the middle of the story, it was great. It had the horror and the suspense however, near the ending of the book you start to wonder when things mentioned at the beginning of the book will be handled and exactly when the major war/battle would take place. Well, let me tell you, nothing ever gets mentioned about all the plans and plot implemented at the beginning of the story and you wanna know how many chapters the major war/battle was?? HALF A CHAPTER. It ended basically saying, "And Flanders lived happily ever after with his women, the end." That's it. That's all you get. Nothing else of importance gets mentioned all because the author wanted to fit the story within a certain amount of chapters. Cheap ending and not worth the money. 🤦🏾

This is a Chinese based app...

I'm so excited to read more about her plan than anything else in the story, ngl LOL

Good havens, it's finally back 😭

I'm so excited for the battle!!

The useless son of a big shot being kidnapped is so refreshing. Shows just how weak he actually is

edit: why'd I have to find the story now LOL

In my opinion, I really like the flow of the novel and I don't have a preference for what pov it's from. I think the pacing is good and the descriptions are also good. Keep up the great work, you got this!!

This story so far is pretty good. I'm excited to see what the future holds!!

Why'd u have to find this story now?? 🤧

THERES MORE PASTA NAMES?!! 🤣🤣

As yes, the three Counts of pasta 😂

Nobody corrected me after all these years?! 🤦🏾 *Black hole

Extracting billions of toxins and Gourmet of another world

Unparalleled after ten consecutive draws

This should actually be turning yellow with greed cause green means being envious

Toe Teaching

What a cheap ending :/

I only have one thing to say, that was good. That was really good

does short people not exist to you? 😭