Colorblindd

Ya I agree with the other guys review unfortunately. Things were going great and the writing was actually well done but clones just arnt my thing. Still left you with 4 stars though cause while it's not my cup of tea and I won't be reading the overall quality of your work is still good. Best of luck :)

Thanks for the chapter :)

Well you asked for something interesting lol

Like i said in the other comment, reincarnation was made illegal in china years ago so they have to say time traveler or something similar instead. Sounds stupid but its true look it up lol

Reincarnation was made illegal in china years ago so they have to say time traveler or something similar instead. Sounds stupid but its true look it up lol

I can see it already. Ash being surrounded by men in love with him and being completely clueless thinking hes just made some amazing friends on his journey lol

There's infrasound which propagates hundreds of miles through solid matter with no loss that woks as a massively wide range invisible intimidation or moral debuff. Its been linked to spontaneous feelings of fear and anxiety due to how it resonates with the body. The specific "ghost frequency" is 18-19 Hz which coincides with the resonant frequency of our eyes and is linked to hallucinations as well while the heart has a resonant frequency of 7.83 Hz both falling into the infrasound range. Its not a sound that's scaring you but something you feel from inside yourself. Now add a reiatsu resonance to the mix and the "ghost frequency" might just get a little scarier lol

thanks for the chapter :)

I've missed this book :)

Well it is made of seastone so itd be a great beating stick against devil fruit users lol