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i am actually debating if i should add Mordred in the harem.. on one hand its i n cest.. on the other hand.. she's currently the person who loved Jaune the most and who know him the best...
i also had to clarify this.. Jaune actually cares that he is had basically killed 2 people.. its just that he is having an existential crisis on why did he not care.. maybe its because i couldn't convey it better than i wanted to in writing.. but jaune does care that he killed 2 people..
typo fix "maybe adult Jaune wouldn't care"
Jaune have a "feeling" that had done something "worse" before..... not as in he had killed an innocent before but as in he had done something worse rhan bashing somebody's head in... and you don't think Jaune would care killing r@pist.. maybe ADULT jaune would care but this is 12 years old Jaune.. he is not an ADULT who had seen how bad the world is.. this jaune is a CHILD... the most "bad" thing he had ever done is not even hurting someone, it was running away.. he lived in a town where everyone basically know each other and is practically the best place for children, ehy else would miles or luna let Jaune wander off to the town alone with no supervision since he was a child!?!.. i think you had read too much self insert or people that had been reincarnated/transmigrated... this jaune is 12 years old! not a guy who was 18 years old in his past life and reincarnated into jaune... i think it is safe to say that i had made it pretty clear that jaune is a reincarnation of king Jaune.. from the dreams.. that is where he get the feeling of dejavu from, but this reincarnation works more traditionally than webnovel's self insert reincarnation in which jaune have no memory of his past life or even knew he was a reincarnator.. i am not kidding but i am slightly annoyed that you expect jaune to think like an adult when he is a child! this is like the third comment that you expect jaune to think like you (an adult) and not a 12 year old or even a 7 year old boy..
its like.. you know.. your feelings of lobe grows..
miles told Jaune about it in chapter 40, he doesn't say it in explicit detail but enough for Jaune to understand.
he's 12.... none of us make the perfect decision when we're 12..
jaune being weak isn't the biggest reason why miles didn't let him become a hunter.. there are bigger reason for that..
i was trying to make the scene more dramatic.. sorry....
the white forcefield? aura emit a forcefieldlike thingy around the body? and also stress and shock? imagine you chilling on a forest a see a huge ass werewolf like creature, you would prioritize not dying first and would not notice what the fuck is making you strong... and he is also 7 years old at this point in time.. his brain isn't fully developed yet... so yeah.. i guess i could had wrote it better.. but thankfully my writing had improved by a lot now compared to back then..