Shem_Sama

Why do most author make a fatty trope friend for most MC's? Honestly it's pretty cliche, next would be the fatty unlock his hidden bloodline or something..

The mc ain't cool at all, he's more like a fool trying to show off..btw the mc isn't probably an oc at all as his personality is kinda like naruto that's a bit smarter and with a cheat.

The mc is a fooking show off.

Gordon Ramsay in another world 😆

The story keeps getting better and better

can't he just transplant Sharingan or byakugan? like holyjokers naruto fanfic

another must "Protect Naruto Squad" author here. wasting the low profile or sacrifice given to him by his mother just to be friends with naruto or to create more drama like most in fanfiction.net

siiimmpp!

since the mc has tsunade chasing after him, why not add ringo to the list of people trying to kill him by stealing ringo's sword? (I know it's stupid to let your enemy live and comeback to bite your ass) but it's probably funny to mess with genji Lol!

Hayst the mc haven't had any breakthrough in his cultivation even once since chapter 1 and to this chapter..🤦