webnovel
1622073713629
Nicolas_Bahamondes

Nicolas_Bahamondes

Lv2

I hate the prologue of gods, apart from being useless, it usually leaves the mc as nothing more than a monkey for the amusement of a god or leaves the god as an idiot. slave systems mc 凸(`0´)凸

2020-04-04 UnidoChile
1.2h

de leitura

1336

Ler livros

Emblemas

3

Momentos

1354
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes7d
    Comentou

    This is one of the things that sucks about the Chinese: they give their characters broken powers and then weaken them so they have slow growth. decide that they are idiots, op or weaklings.

    1. Uchiha Sasuke (without Sharingan) Skills: Fire Style: Great Fireball Jutsu, Lion Combo, Chidori
    The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe
    Anime e quadrinhos · Gfdsa
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes7d
    Comentou

    Since the Chinese are classist, each one lives in their environment without bothering or complaining, so yes, within their own world they can be considered good people.

    But coming from a place full of kindness, from the former land of China, this kind of life destroyed my values and reshaped my life.
    The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe
    Anime e quadrinhos · Gfdsa
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes7d
    Respondeu a dadadada

    In a twisted way, yes, they are very respectful and worship Buddha, but they are also very classist and easy to upset, as well as resentful.

    But coming from a place full of kindness, from the former land of China, this kind of life destroyed my values and reshaped my life.
    The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe
    Anime e quadrinhos · Gfdsa
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes7d
    Comentou
    Although Charles didn't say it directly, his confident tone and carefree attitude clearly showed that he didn't regard John Wick's abilities highly.
    The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe
    Anime e quadrinhos · Gfdsa
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes7d
    Comentou
    The guy who wiped out an entire gang over a dog.
    The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe
    Anime e quadrinhos · Gfdsa
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes7d
    Comentou
    [T/N: I omitted a few sentences due to offensive content. I will do so in the future chapters as well unless it affects the readability. But if you want to keep the chapters as it is, let me know.]
    The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe
    Anime e quadrinhos · Gfdsa
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes8d
    Respondeu a Daoist906425
    The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe
    Anime e quadrinhos · Gfdsa
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes8d
    Respondeu a ilove_3260
    DxD: ReKiba
    Anime e quadrinhos · Alcoholic_Panda
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes8d
    Respondeu a TaRon_Powell

    Yes, his writing went down a lot after the group chat. and a strange obsession was born to mention the beauty of his character and describe his crotch all the time.

    "Sorry, Sensei." Isao looked awkwardly at Kyoko as he apologized. As his body grew stronger due to the DNA of animals that had been absorbed into his body, he felt like it was so easy for him to go into the heat. Moreover, he was young and strong. Lastly, Kyoko's mature and charming body was so unbearable! 
    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
    Anime e quadrinhos · akikan40
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes11d
    Postado

    Is this a Chinese translation or did you get the idea from a Chinese story? The story is super bad, the protagonist is a Sasuke, an emo who spends his time simply obsessed with power, almost the entire story is about him training.

    DxD: The Dragon Oppai
    Anime e quadrinhos · Orael
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes11d
    Postado

    Well, the translation is pretty bad, it's hard to follow the narrative, the protagonist is as flat as possible, just a random guy who wants power and a big part of the story is him training and showing off his power.

    One Piece Thundergod Marine
    Anime e quadrinhos · DarkShadow95
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes19d
    Respondeu a VIJETH_R

    If the law that part appears in the first chapter, I mean that the protagonist changes some important event, has a romance with a character, the story changes or it will be all the sagas and events of the anime.

    One Piece: Bai Ye Deputy Captain of the Straw Hats
    Anime e quadrinhos · PapaSmurf0700
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes20d
    Respondeu a VIJETH_R

    Actually, you're right, I only read about 20 chapters. You can give spoilers to see if I'm wrong and it's worth it.

    One Piece: Bai Ye Deputy Captain of the Straw Hats
    Anime e quadrinhos · PapaSmurf0700
    detail
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes21d
    Comentou

    good luck with your story, I recommend reading other fics since they all repeat the same formula so you can get an idea and don't do it

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes21d
    Comentou

    I don't see any use for the system other than functioning as a female contact, it hasn't done anything that couldn't be done without it. I hope you can balance the power, remember if the protagonist is very strong you have to make him charismatic. Don't nerf him, you have to find a way to prevent him from being present or give him an opponent equal to his power.

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes21d
    Comentou

    here we go again

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes21d
    Comentou

    Until now the system has explained everything that is explained in that world, what useless garbage.

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes21d
    Comentou
    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes21d
    Comentou

    What is the need for a system? Explain with numbers that you are strong, words exist too

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Nicolas_Bahamondes
    Nicolas_Bahamondes21d
    Postado

    This is not funny, neither history nor logic, a piece has been transmitted for 20 years, they could not respect a little of the history that has already been formed.

    Double Comparison: Start with Revolutionary Army
    Anime e quadrinhos · AnimeFanfic01
    detail