AK_Walls

The correct word (coincidence) finally. Hope it wasn’t coincidental.

A lot of misgendering- referring to FL as “he” or “him” and other male characters as “she” or “her” again (it occured in the first few chapters then it improved later on but now it’s back).

The pace is just right for a novel with a total of almost 6k chapters. It’s not dragging like other novels that spend 30 chapters on a single banquet.

What’s good about it is that the writing style is very direct and straightforward so there are no redundant descriptions spanning for decades and unnecessary encounters to expand word count. What’s not so good about it is that it’s too direct and straightforward that there’s no plot buildup and transitions so it becomes rather dry after a while.