I'll say the book is good and the story line is okay, but you'll have to restructure your sentences well and if the person is narrating what his day is like, make it more accurate and try swaping some words that are more rhyming and goes well with the sentence. But it's a lovely book.

This is a very interesting book and I like how the character building is, I rezlly sympathize with the female-lead and this is an amazing book.

I love the way the book started and how one of the character is chatty and the other non-chatty, it's a good blend of characters and the descriptions are really good.

Wow, just wow the fighting scenes where so vivid and real, it real showcased the emotions and the pain of the male-lead character, this book is amazing and the author is also amazing.

An interesting book, good work writer, I love the writing quality and the setting of the book, it just gives a clear feedback on the characters and what they're going through.

kids and questions

hehe, murder him

first of all wow, this author is amazing and the book is just too good and I love the book cover, I could feel the emotions pouring out of the book this is just too good.

nothing like fredom dnalging like carrots in front of you

This book is pretty enthusiastic one and really nice, nice work author. but i would've preferred if you used the normal names for the drinks so as not to confuse people and maybe more subtle words, but it was great.

a surprise asset for later in the book

noted, but i read a book once and it also related formaldehyde with hospital's

Keep it up writer, the book is amazing that it kept drawing me in some more, I feel like unkown is that old man reborn or maybe not, looking forward to more.

haha

This book is really interestiing, I'm looking forward to how elena and the system is going to bond tho, are they going to rrust each other or one might betray the other, but all in all the book is amazing, exce[t for a few errors here and there.

I give the writer a big thumbs up, this is another amazing book, especially your writing style, it makes one immeresed in the story and it gives life to it.

It's an amzing book, especially the first chapter,I love your writing style, keept it up and with time you'll get way better than what you are now.[img=recommend]

You deserve five stars, it's the humor for me and literally depicting a seen with truck-kun is amazing, I loved the chapter 1 and how smoothly it went, your book is amazing.

author at least pet him

so much for a little freedom, truck-kun is at it again.