Dave_Guest

At this Point i would Anna just let her be absorbed completely. Would be a nice power up for her and the viltrumet gene could give her a kind of gene lock

Immortal. Invincible is in Marvel just Not Right.

What a nice surprise this Book is. In the beginning i thought it World be bothersome with the dhadow Monarch Elements. But the progressive is new different and Unique, and i love the class. This is unbelievably funny to read and Not Depression Like other naruto fanfiction. Please dont drop this author.

I really like it. I loved the books of inheritance cycle. Even if eragons decisions in the books were at some times very annoying it was always fun to read. I hope you can make the story with your alterations even more exciting. And the start is very good.

No rider please. And a human form would be nice. You could make his human reincarnation align with his body at some point. Like the naming. Make his reincarnated soul be marked bound and tronsformed by the dragon mark. That could be the reason for his human form. You could even give him some partial tronsformations at a later time.

Wouldn’t an op progression be more fun? Nazarik in one peace would be just a conquest story and the end of one peace is still open. I would love to read something about an experiment. Let the scientists of one peace come together an create an ultimate lifeform. Giants, fishmen, luarian, sea king, mink, kaido, born destroyers. Just create a monster and let him eat the human humans- Adam fruit. You can let him life as a slave, go on with marine, then pirate or revolutionary. So many possibilities. I would love a story like that

Op as fuck. And don’t forget the comment: only positive aspects will be inherited.

Nice ideas. You can make his stasis into an improvement of his bloodline. Like he didn’t age, and in combination with the hyuga seal an improvement of his bloodline through passive refinement. Like a fortune is disguise.

Thanks for the chapter, but I personally am not that big of a fan of excessive manipulation. And manipulating love twists the mind.

I really like this story. Chapter could be a little longer, but the story development is nice and new. It’s not only about a powerhungry mc and with nice and funny plot twists