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Knight_Hawke24dRespondeu a OverlordBGslol I know Jedi aren't bumped up this fast unless its a special case, times of war, or they are just prodigy/genius.
"As of today the Jedi Council hereby grants Zarik the rank of Jedi Master and as a gift the republic and the chancellor has deemed him worthy of having his own clone legion aswell as his own starfighter and Capital Ship." Master Skywalker finished the speech. "Wait, what?" "Bu-But how and why?" "I'll tell you about it all later." Master Windu whispered to me.- Knight_Hawke4mthRespondeu a Michael_BrightwellCh 9 Chapter 9
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- Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a XavierKing_6497
- Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a Miki_Marlo75
I've made it so each character has their own unique dialogue and their own way of speaking and being able to tell who's talking and who's replying instead of doing your cliche of saying something and who's replying back only time I do is if it's sentence cut off by an interruption or just plain old thinking. There are small time jumps in the first few chapters because I'm keeping most of the young justice team and adventures the same. I'm not steering from the original vision just introducing a new antagonist and MCs who are not part of the Young justice universe but help shape them into better versions of themselves on both sides. yes I agree the Grammer needs work. I hope I answered most of your core issues with this fanfiction.
- Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a LukeMorningStar
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- Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a Toby_Gamer_2577Ch 1 Flash Forward
- Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a jahmiiCh 2 Chapter 1
- Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a Chris_Matte
He calls himself Infinite Spartan in the reason no matter even if he dies the Spartan armor and his will shall live forever he wants to bring peace for the metahumans and citizens of apokalypse that's why he's called the Infinite Spartan.
"I trust you to have my back when things get hairy." I moved a stray hair away from her eyes and tucked it behind her ear. "Don't hide those pretty grey eyes." I smiled at her and got back up and put my helm back on. "What's your symbol?" Red Arrow asked. "Your symbol for when the people of Earth see you they feel safe. But also what is your alias?" "My symbol is going to be the Greek Spartan helmet with an infinite sign on the helmet. As for my alias you can call me The Infinite Spartan." "Not infinite star?" Gem-Night asked. "That was the name that Cadmus gave me it's time I separate from them and focus on the team and my friends." - Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a Chris_Matte
why do you think it's too clunky?
"I trust you to have my back when things get hairy." I moved a stray hair away from her eyes and tucked it behind her ear. "Don't hide those pretty grey eyes." I smiled at her and got back up and put my helm back on. "What's your symbol?" Red Arrow asked. "Your symbol for when the people of Earth see you they feel safe. But also what is your alias?" "My symbol is going to be the Greek Spartan helmet with an infinite sign on the helmet. As for my alias you can call me The Infinite Spartan." "Not infinite star?" Gem-Night asked. "That was the name that Cadmus gave me it's time I separate from them and focus on the team and my friends." - Knight_Hawke1yrRespondeu a jahmiiCh 3 Chapter 2