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I really like the character's, they're well written and the interactions are interesting. Although there's a little too much gore for my taste. There's only a few chapters so far, but I can tell this story has potential. Keep up the good work

The writing quality of the book is very well developed. I really enjoyed the somber undertone the story gave, reminiscent of the grim dark fantasy genre. The development is fantastic and I can't wait for more, keep up the updates author

No, I plan to pick it up at some point. I'm getting ready for college, so writing isn't my biggest priority at the moment. Although, I really would like to keep going with it soon.

The begining is slow, but when you think it's going to normal, it sprinkles a little bit of foreshadowing to keep you interested. The writing is really well done and the descriptions are great. I can't wait to see what will happen! Good job author!

I enjoyed reading this story, it's really good so far and the premise is very interesting. I already added it to my library and I plan to read all of it when I get the chance. Some of the grammar is out of place, but it still intrigues me nonetheless. The last thing I want to say is that what I've read is amazing so far and I look forward to reading more in the future. Thank you, author!!

Yeah, he is.

A little creative liberty, I like to think receiving a god's power for the first time would hurt. Although, I could be wrong.

Wow, I really like the start of this!!

The story has a really good premise and I like how the world building is done over time. There are a few mistakes, but I don't think anyone wants people to critique their first work too seriously. Good job author and keep up the updates!

The story is really well written, it's captivating and easy to read. The only thing I can comment on is the lack of comma's where there needs to be some. Other than that the story is really well written and I enjoyed it thoroughly.