DHillion

Urla feels kinda odd, she seems there but not there at the same time. I'm curious to see how the author is going to develop her further.

A repeat

Rest's gender got flipped.

Author there needs to be distinction between conversations and inner thoughts.

Depends on your country of origin.

how can I help

An excellent start to what I think is a very promising story and look forward to more updates to come.

This is a repeat of an earlier chapter.

release more please

the story of particular has a good deal of potential but it's being held back with all the excessive background information of characters who haven't played any major role in the story as of yet. it would be better to avoid all the sexual insinuations tells time for the situation to happen the plot is solid and I believe it could be a really good story I've got to back off all of the info drops until it's necessary for them to happen.