silentpassenger90

great job so far! I have to agree with his comment. I think you have established he is a more experienced battlefield commander than Steve Roger's and now you can have him be more involved with the major plot of the movie. I would also agree that an interlude from the both the allies and axis powers would be a good way to showcase the differences John has made to the war.

This was stolen from Sinyk on fanfition.net. the title of the story is Harry Potter and the Daft Morons. He completed the story in 2018. if anyone wants to go read it, it there.

I can't wait for this upcoming battle! thanks for the chapter.

Great chapter. This is hands down the best ASOIAF/dimensional chat fic on this platform I have read to date! this is the one story I constantly come back to check for an update and reread when I have the time.

Are you the same author that posted this on fanfiction.net? It had been over 4 years since u updated. Is this a rewrite, or are you just crossposting?

other than the fact that he will have a hard time explaining where he got the lightsaber and clothes, I thought it was good. my question now is, if at the end of the template will he be able to retain the lightsaber fighting styles since he practiced them himself, or will they be wiped out if he chooses to retain force usage?

yikes.

I read this on whim, and boy, am I glad I did. I am hooked. great job! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I think maybe making an outline of what your next 4 or 6 chapters may help with the block. knowing where u want ur character to go makes figuring out how you want him to get there a bit easier.

write the story u want. otherwise u will be agonizing over peoples opinions and make u lose motivation. great chapter!