Krasher024

It felt like a chore to read and it the main character is dull. I can't tell you if it gets better because I only read the first 5 chapters, but oh well give it a shot maybe it is something for you as it has potential.

I wanted to give this novel a try after years of seeing it around and I can't say anything about the new chapters, but I'm currently somewhere around chapter 50 and the there are so many simple mistakes or just weird sentence stucture mistakes that it makes it dofficult for me to no just drop it again, but I'm currently out of good novels so I'm giving it a shot in the hope that it will get better. The story is fine, the mc is someone I don't really like, but also not hate. He is fine just a bit boring. Some plotholes here and there and it sometimes lacks the feeling of distance and time. Also the dialog is not that well writen so you somtimes don't really know who is acctually talking and makes conversations feel chaotic and disjointed as if you missed a sentence from someone else or accidentily skipped it. Anyway I will continue to read it now and again and update if it gets better. (I really hope it does)

i think the reason for why it is loosing interest is the way you show off the oc. We see less and less of him and people manly talk about him. Most just want to read a fun advebture of one person and don't really care about the other people. Especially because we didn't really got to learn your oc really well so people tend to care less and less about all this cause we know fairly little about him and his personality cause most of the story is more like a retelling about him. We never really get to know the way he thinks, feels and acts cause a lot of times so much time suddenly went past and suddenly so much changed it can be either overwhelming or just offputting. Anyways that is just my guess. I still like your story. The most important thing is that you have fun with what you write abd enjoy the journey.

Thanks for this great chapter. Now part of me wishes that this was how cannon happned. Although I have the feeling that you want po and tai lung to fight, cause shifu is now passed out and po will think that tai lung killed him when he sees him like that.

Good, but not for me cause harem. For the people who do not care it is certainly worth a shot.

I don't like the mc and the direction the novel was going.

A good novel I would heavily recommend. The only thing you should keep in mind is that the beginning was rough, but it improved a lot over the time. I just dropped it because I don't like harem.

It's bad. For anyone with a brain it just hurts to read. The english is horrendous, with grammar of a mentally disabled 5 year old and the story is like a fever dream written by someone who watched naruto once and thought is was a good idea to make a fanfic while being on crack. All in all if your english is under passing grade or you at least don't mind such a thing you can give this story a try.

He can now think stupid faster. Like me on too much energy drinks.