UsedCreation
My eyes have long surpassed the limits of flesh and blood My body a mere shell of what i was My soul no longer my own And my thoughts are that of another I am a slave to my existence
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UsedCreation9hComentouNo way to bring her back?
So this is what it feels like to lose someone... I... I don't like it.- UsedCreation1dRespondeu a ImSadge
It's just the lack of word count, otherwise everyone reading this now was looking for something like this on purpose. You'll get a bigger audience over time, just keep on writing and trust it'll pay off. Your writing skills are really good, just some motivation and a little help will take it very far, you're doing great man
- UsedCreation3dPostado
The writing really just breathes life into my characters who seem so emotionally dead and I love how it is being portrayed so far. The plot is a tad confusing as of the first 12 chapters but I can see it developing really well. Traveling to wherever those flames take them, finding ways to slow or completely rid MC of the Hollowing curse, while going through worlds and building bonds to restore one's humanity. Might not even be what the Author is going for but the possible outcomes are exciting. Great story and great writing. Keep up the good work
- UsedCreation10mthPostado
Not even going to lie to you man, I've been needing a fic like this. Been meaning to write one like this for a while, but I never read the time to start one. Aside from that, it's a really good take on the game and an excellent story and great writing. Wish updates were more common but I won't rush success. Good job
- UsedCreation10mthRespondeu a Jaritorin
thank you
{℉ʋŔŢĤëʀ βεĻɵὡ} - UsedCreation10mthComentou
Further Below in the Depths? So the DLC areas? or not that far?
{℉ʋŔŢĤëʀ βεĻɵὡ} - UsedCreation11mthComentou
ADAM?
'Silver's finger turned blue as something was slowly injected into the girl's bloodstream.' - UsedCreation1yrRespondeu a Alibi_Lullaby
- UsedCreation1yrComentou
The Messangers?
'A strange Taxidermi jar containing... Something undescribable.' - UsedCreation1yrComentou
Could've summoned the Big Snake from the whistle to eat the bodies
'There were simply too many bodies, and some of them might be interesting to bring back, such as the mechanical constructs, and even the weapons used by the strong Undead and parts of their bodies for research.' - UsedCreation1yrComentou
LETZDUITTTT
"They were sparse, but you mentioned that apparently there's a species of spirits there that can harness their souls. And they run around with special weapons that are born from their souls as well. I think you called them – Shinigami?" - UsedCreation1yrRespondeu a Hadjii
yes
Momo blinked, staring at Izuku in shock, 'Fifteen!? That was fifteen percent!? Just how powerful would he be if he uses one hundred percent?' - UsedCreation1yrPostado
Perfect. Literally perfection. It brings out all the elements I would desire from the nasuverse, and then combining so many elements from different series so seamlessly, it's absolute perfection. the occasional grammar error is barely even worth mentioning. Plus your take on Shirou is exactly what many have wished of him. Perfection
- UsedCreation1yrComentou"Specifically, we are going hunt to Altrouge Brunestud."
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EA
For a moment, numerous emotions ran across the lord's face, the first was fear, and the last was bitterness. "You have a very big goal if you want to create something more powerful than that thing. I'm not even sure if it could be called a sword." - UsedCreation1yrComentou
Will he at least get his limbs back?
It's complicated. - UsedCreation1yrRespondeu a Unknown_Shadow_150
I mean if something does indeed happen to them, going hack to DxD and getting some evil pieces may be necessary
Though…..if worse comes to worse, I'll forgo my hidden identity. I don't think my pride can let me just sit and watch if they got into danger and I could help. I accepted them as my responsibility, that made them my people, and I'll do what I can to assure their survival. - UsedCreation1yrRespondeu a TheDeathGod
True, it is after all the only stone with a true mind of its own.
These were things I had no control over and I was perfectly fine with it.