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brother your writing is good but u know boy lived 2 lifetime but his current personality is like kid who really in 8th standard but he is not .and second story is little slow and u elaborate many things which can be cut down ... it just my view don't mind .... overall it's good continue writing ... all the luck to you

good bro looking forward for your story

I would like to look forward this book ....an indian novel with good storytelling

that darkseid powers man . u make sissy naive crying protagonist.u Gave darkseid power give him a personality also .all crying naive I don't know what to think of

fan boy .....man he is a transmigrated person even he knows alittle about world...

Kaguya will come for you .... giving chakra .😃😃🤘🤘

He saved Bucky which altered timeline

He save Bucky ..he altered timeline ....don't understand why then sleep in ice then

Good going.......

First build story pal then anything bout harem