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hi, I just tried to look you up on patreon, but all I find is a story called primal hunter under the name PrimalDemon. is that your account?
hey somebody's totally stealing your story they reframed it as a crossover between Grand Theft Auto V and Fast and Furious but the first chapter is a direct rip off of your story the dude who stole it has already posted 60 chapters so he's totally biting what you've already written and reposting it as his translation story you just have to search up fast and furious and you'll see his story
is the link to you patreon broken? I tried looking it up to subscribe but I can't find it no matter what I use...both the website and the app, both return no results for the user name you provided
what kind of ruin this for me is he changed the name from you Shiro she hoe into azashiro at like chapter 28 and it just kept going till I stopped at chapter 38 the main character kept being mislabeled and the hybrid Shinigami Hollow had the same name as ashiro so I kept getting confused it was just too disjointed for me it's a good story but without fixing the Miss naming of the main character and the other disjointed point of view jumping it just kills it for me
hey author aren't some of the endings repeating I kept seeing some repeating content in the very end of the chapters, 😁😁
this is just a pure torture story well it's true it has some elements of World building and character building it focuses 10 chapters on just a child being tortured it makes it seem like the author gets off with torturing children there's no logic to anything about having him in prisoned and then tortured then healed then tortured then healed all it seems to be is that he wants to emphasize that the MC is tortured into insanity and then wants to plunge the world into fire it's just basically a remake of Obito losing Rin and being manipulated by Madara he's just doing the same thing except he's subbing Horizon for Madara and then the MC for Obito it's idiotic
it's been fixed and updated
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I fixed it, ty
I made the correction thanx for pointing it out