Popoou

Terimakasih suhu~. Sangat menyenangkannya membaca bab dengan MC sombong.

Hi. nice book here, i really like your writing. the plot isn't bad, it's better than the CN novels out there which are very boring because of the slow factor, naive (in terms of killing), likes face slaps and hiding power. man... this is much better. hope it doesn't fall

Ugh... Apa kata kata cina ini? Membuatku mual hingga mati.

Aku membacanya 5x, bisakah kamu segera melakukan update tuan?. Petani ini sangat bosan tanpa pekerjaan darimu.

Alright honest judgment here, I really liked the start. How the MC grows slowly and the plot is so different from other FFs. But it was destroyed halfway with the destruction of the Holy Family with our MC strength being at bronze rank 2... I mean bruh, I know you said our MC has true cultivation, but what is that OP power??? Even MC's story of being a colonizer is fine, but not to mess up the entire Glory of MC's body cradle. Well... Just like that, I stopped reading at CH 30.

I get complicated watching random guy jump out of nowhere, I struggle to read it any more. If this becomes a random OC that breaks the story, it's fine to drop it

Yandere lagi???? Bukankah ini sangat sulit untuk MC. Aku tidak ingin melihat Sunade di penggal gara - gara dekat dengan MC

Good choice born outside of the Fire Nation. You know, Konoha is very dark with all kinds of monsters in it.

Rasanya Geli

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