tyrese_allen
Escrita
de leitura
1441
Ler livros
don't change
pleas!!!!! make the mc date anyone but momo 🙄🙄🙄😐😐😐😖😖😖😞😞😞
only the mc's loved ones
why is rumi his mum !! 😕😕 and who is the mc going to have a relationship with , it better not be anyone clich like momo , or jiro 😤😤,, just pleas let the mc have somone like toga himiko or mina ashido even an ***** older then his age in the anime is fine as long as you dont ruin the story with clich romances .
can you change it from stone too energy sheilds
for a reccomendation try reading *(crazy leveling system) or try reading urban cultivation novels
have you not read cultivation novels , or general system type novels ... if you've read as much as me you would no that the pill comes from the system it's not a fake it's not drugged , the aim is for the system to be both beneficial and bad for the mc otherwise the story would be dry . what I meant is for the mc to have an edge over the other characters ... wether having more talent then others in different areas or having something that nobody else has.
can he use the system earlier . the task is too long , and normally for the type of book your writing the mc would at least get a body reformation pill too make there body more fit and proportional , or they would get a musical talent so can you give one to the mc earlier
I would say just get an op but not too op bloodline and get neither ... tho their op they are too strong so I'd recommend getting the right bloodlines for the right world's, . For example get a mythical beast bloodline considering it can be taken as an animagus form by others 😁😁
my hero acadamia
I mean ... I have no problems with kids , tho it just ruins the story in only 30 - 40 chapters when the mc could have genuinely searched for a good love interest , and have had a good and satisfying action filled adventure . So just make it so the mc can choose wether to get his lover pregnant or not instead of having a child to early on in the story .
Can you pleas make the mc like boys and girls at the same time 🤔😗😁
change it the harem is shit.