Nullinvoid

No thank you catching it. I am not perfect.

Author here! So first thank you for reading my story it is a story I've wanted to write for a long time. The story isn't a power fantasy so don't expect insane power creep while characters will become more powerful. I want to keep away from insane god-like abilities. Doing as little as recommending this to a friend or adding to reading list helps a lot, but the most you can do is vote or review. The story will have romance, action, political intrigue, and magic. More will be revealed as we continue on this journey in the wildlands continent.

Thank you for the kind compliment. I Always want to strive for better worldbuilding. Expect two more chapters in the next day give or take.

I would have given this a bit higher of rating, but Stability of Updates knocked it down a peg or two. This story is solid. REALLY solid. It is a shame the author has not added more chapters. I recommend you go back through add some more details to first chapters and plow ahead. Keep up the good work.

90% of what you need Google docs will catch. The big advise I can give you which helps with mine is read your paragraphs outloud. It will help you realize if the flow is good. (feel free to leave a review I just need one more haha)

I have to admit I enjoyed it. The story is solid. For grammar if you use google docs it should pick up about 70% of the glaring errors. I recommend you use that in the future it will greatly help you in your writing and you will also learn what to watch for when writing.

This is honestly a fantastic work and I think it deserves more reviews and ratings. It is surprising when people miss out on a gem. One piece of advise to the author break up dialogue a bit with some observations of their surroundings it will make it flow off page a bit nicer.

World background is difficult rate since I'm only 3 chapters in. Overall I like the direction of the story. I'm more of a slow burn romance kind of person, but we will see where the author takes us. I do enjoy a good romance when done right. They can get cliche fast and if you dislike one of the mains it is doomed to fail. So far I like the characters.

The writing itself is top notch. Most of the rest is a bit early to tell, but I can say one thing. The writing is solid. My only real gripe is that the spacing in the chapter itself is a bit odd. I would just go through and put some spaces between paragraphs for ease of reading. Otherwise a fantastic start.

The story, culture, character design and quality is stellar. Only small thing is don't get to wordy otherwise it is excellent and easy recommendation.