cat_of_doom
the cat that will one day consume the world or not depends
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Nooooo cliffhanger kuuuuuun
This story is pretty neat There are no grammar mistakes and the sentences are easy to read with the plot flowing smoothly although it seems a bit dull at times as it can feel more like a retelling of events instead off the main characters story but that alone doesn’t make it a bad story it’s plot is very well thought out and you can tell there was research put into the subject for a semi realistic story Overall it’s an good story with only a few mistakes here and there
Blasphemy!!
Aren’t they brothers?
There a bit messy and I feel like things are happening to fast but it has potential so keep working At it 😁👍
such a siscon