Blaman_10

the author doesn't know what to write about anymore, so he just throws in random stupid shit

ya 300 ch in, and he still has longer and more conversations with men, actually other than his daughter he doesn't even talk to women.

I really like the story so far but I will be honest, it is starting to get boring. other than flirting with his women literally nothing has happened for the last 25 chapters.

that was just a waste of a chapter. don't bring a bad guy into it if the MC isn't going to do anything

well this novel just went downhill fast. how about focusing on him getting stronger instead of putting stupid shit in the novel.

For starters, the novel would be way better if the MC wasn't 12 years old. There really isn't any point to this novel. He wants to become stronger so he goes somewhere to train and of course some evil cult ends up attacking which nothing comes out of it. the cult is stopped then they escape so they can attack again. He goes back home for 1 chapter then it's right back to leaving to train at another place which you guessed it, a evil cult attacks again. There really is just no point to the whole novel. And although this is just my personal opinion, I really can't stand novels that have a child as the MC. Instead of doing a time skip to 12 years old you could've done it up to 18. him having the power that he has will be just as shocking at 18 since everyone else with his power is 90 or older.

please tell me there is a time skip coming up cuz i don't want to read a novel with a 12 year old MC

OK so is the author just trying to destroy his own novel? like what the fuck is all this stupid shit?

MC is so stupid that it completely ruins the novel

don't forget he is suppose to stop the war between demons and humans which he could easily do just by revealing that he's not dead then tell everyone they betrayed and tried to kill him. but nope MC is a retard and doesn't do any of that