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Wheeler47841dComentouFear the old in a profession where men die young
"That was a disgraceful demonstration. You four showcased no unity with each other and didn't even attempt to overcome me other than your feeble attempts at Taijutsu. You walked into the battle with a slight bit of arrogance, thinking that I was a weak old man and that you would be able to easily defeat me as long as I fought you head on. But let this me a lesson to each and every one of you. A Shinobi who lives to old age is always a dangerous Shinobi. Now, even though all of you are pathetic right now, I plan to turn you into monsters that will put even the Sannin to shame once I'm done. Now go get breakfast, together, and meet me back here tomorrow morning at the same time. I want you to reflect on this loss and examine what ways you could have won." Danzo said, with him then vanishing, his position replaced by nothing but the wind.- Wheeler47842dComentou
good pun
Their conversation gradually shifted back to the matters at hand as they prepared to depart for their meeting with the Hand. The transition from the leisurely pace of breakfast to the urgency of their agenda was seamless, a testament to the adaptability and focus of both leaders. - Wheeler47843dComentou
Or to spend it before they die
Within the Foundation, there was a saying passed around that went a long way off. Most people have to try to ensure they don't spend their entire paycheck before the next one comes in. We at the Foundation, however, have to try just as hard to even spend half of ours before a new one comes rolling in. - Wheeler47844dComentou
Is the president a robot? sure sounds like one
"Thank you, Raiden. It's certainly an unexpected encounter, but I appreciate your kind words. It sounds like you've been through quite an ordeal. I'm intrigued to hear more about your perspective on recent events. Please, have a seat, and Let's work together to navigate this situation with integrity and uphold the principles of justice." Spoke the President, to Raiden, he then nodded, sat down, and looked around, still weary of the general and guards, he sighed and said " - Wheeler47844dRespondeu a CornyChiWAH
Man of culture
He knew what Tsunade was talking about but he didn't understand why he kept on analyzing Tsunade and her movements, especially the two big mountains on her chest. Even though they weren't legendary 106 at the moment, they were still bigger than many. - Wheeler47849dComentou
That's not how the periodic table works but, it's just a story after all
"Superman here Bru... Batman, what are these things? There are too many." "I don't know Superman, based on my analysis I can identify that these beings have superhuman strength, speed and resistance, they don't seem to have their own conscience, they are practically monsters. The only thing I could conclude is that they are alien in nature, and I am almost certain that they are following orders by someone or something." Batman replied to Superman, his quick analysis was able to infer that these beasts were made of an organic and inorganic alloy that was not on the periodic table, indicating that they were extraterrestrial external beings. - Wheeler478410dComentou
If you find yourself bored with writing cannon, then take time between the arcs for your own original mini ones, I personally think introducing HSR will make the story more convoluted and complicated than it needs to be. Some people also may not like me for saying this but if your having problems writing a lemon chapter just write a passionate scene leading up to it then say they did it and move on. Your writing quality is good and a poorly written lemon would just break the immersion. That's just my thoughts, lll read whatever you write.
Do you think the story should be focused only on Teyvat? Too sketchy and convoluted? Good idea? - Wheeler478411dComentou
Good intro but be careful when you get to this point in the story it doesn't become forced for this scene to play out.
"I made them pay for what they did to you. I can only hope you are now in peace, wherever you are..." A single tear made its way out of the red eyes, silently falling, until it reached and disappeared on the warm ground, illuminated by the sun. - Wheeler478411dRespondeu a Daoist681011
using soru underwater would be like using geppo and soru at the same time
I used Soru and propelled myself toward that man. He was the one who order me to fire at him. As I arrive in front of him, my left hand was pointing upward facing my face, my left elbow was close to my core while my right hand was at the same level as my left elbow, on the right side. I was in a perfect Karate pose. Well as perfect as I could for now. I punched his stomach with my right fist as I brought my left arm down. - Wheeler47842mthComentou
Will he never get his chariot? Even if it's not as powerful as in fate?And I get him not being invincible except his heel, but you could maybe make his full body armament haki really strong.
He does not not have any of the Noble Phantasm's or skills from Fate/Stay. He simply possess Achilles knowledge related to martial arts, weapons, and the like. - Wheeler47842mthComentou
So he doesn't lose his abilities at night? That kind of sucks the fun out of Escanor, sunshine no weakness has been done a hundred times and it just turns him into a one punch man which takes all the fun out of fights. Just my opinion.
Sunshine「太陽サンシャイン, Sanshain」: Escanor's ability is one of duality. He is weakest at midnight, but starting from dawn his power level begins to rise steadily from one hour to the next until it peaks at noon. During his fight with Galand, his power level was shown increasing by 5 points with seemingly every second and was measured at 50,060 while continuing to rise. At his peak, according to Merlin, he easily surpasses any of the other Sins. This cycle is marked by distinct differences in his abilities, personality and appearance. ( no weakness of night) - Wheeler47842mthComentou
+1
3.Hephaestus - Wheeler47842mthComentou
All will be well.
"Greetings, I am Bro'Dee Walker, a devoted disciple of the Blue Lantern Corps. I've arrived to welcome our newest sister into the embrace of hope. I shall be her guide, imparting the wisdom of our ways. Within the vast cosmos, our purpose is to sow the seeds of hope, and our radiant light is the embodiment of unwavering optimism." - Wheeler47842mthComentou
I like the dork lord better than the dark lord
"We found two Horcruxes of the dork lord today," Sirius whispered with a conspiratorial smirk while slyly handing him a wooden box. "Dumbledore and I cleared both. Sadly Slytherin's locket was almost completely broken since it was apparently protected by Parsel-magics and wouldn't give up the soul shard as easily as the thing inside the box. This is my gift to you. Her enchantments might be gone, but you can look into trying to fix them with the remnants still on it. Bella must have been given it for safekeeping, and I plucked it out of her vault earlier today, which started the Horcrux-solved-spree." - Wheeler47842mthComentou
I would much rather get an ID from the system as it should be fool proof while any other ID let batman glance at it and he'd know it's fake.
While I'd prefer not to waste those points on such a mundane matter when I can get a new identity from Livewire on account of her contacts, I had no intention of becoming a personal assistant to some second-rate, edgy DC villainess. - Wheeler47842mthComentou
So he can still get shocked if the battery is full and he's off the ground
[Stored charges can be used to enhance your running speed and leap height, and any extra electricity will be safely channeled into the ground] - Wheeler47842mthComentou
and while he is screwing around like a total idiot the building collapses on top of him, end of story.
Persistently, I kept on clicking, waiting for some kind of reaction from the system. After a bunch of futile clicks, the system responded with a message that was just a series of dots.