Aukima_3246

Classic Erich

(just at chapter 38 and don't write well in English) ok I understand. you want to do something with it later. But it was such a sudden introduction with no build-up. For example, how did he find out about it? and how did he get it? It was suddenly just there when the story needed it. The slaves with the metal talent were well introduced, for example. If the MC had previously tried to find the 3 materials and then tried to find the exact composition and the first attempt failed, he would then have had to get more supplies and would have come across the finished black powder stone. would have created a mystery and the question of where it comes from while the story with Lulu is happening.

I'm confused. Is that something natural in the world? This creates so many questions