Muy desinteresado en mi entorno solo observó mí entorno como si fuesen libros que se escriben con las personas como simples títeres que cuelgan de sus hilos invisibles narrando una historia vacía
2019-11-10 UnidoArgentina
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This feels like a copy and paste which I have seen in many stories especially this part
I'm liking the development of the story, it doesn't go very fast, the MC takes his time without rushing How the plot is going so far is excellent. It remains to be seen how it continues to develop.
The grammar needs improvement, the story progresses well but suddenly it begins to drop information one after another without allowing it to be understood
Confirm that the story is advancing in my opinion it is getting worse the last chapters are practically information and quick information And jump from one event to another as if nothing had happened