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Spacewarrior17

Spacewarrior17

Lv10

Hi Mortals, Mr. Death is here Oh.. someone is Dead! You're Next 😈🔪

2019-11-09 UnidoIndia
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107.5h

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48

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117
  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior172yr
    Respondeu a Ghizghuth

    You didn't get what I was implying. The sentence was unnecessary or say not appropriate to explain the situation. also, been a long time I have read it. I most definitely forgor why I wrote it. ☠️

    If he were to do so for Zhao Ya and the others, they might grow reliant on him, and this kind of mindset could potentially limit their future accomplishments. However, Lu Chong was different.
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    Library of Heaven's Path
    Oriental · Heng Sao Tian Ya
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior172yr
    Respondeu a rocketbaby

    nah, don't worry.

    "How could I be drunk." Lightning protested. "When I was sailing, I often had drinking battles with the crew and I never lost one."
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    Release That Witch
    Fantasia · Second Eye
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Respondeu a meixiaolian

    Thank you for the review, just so you know the chapters are a little complicated and will still be for the first part. It is just a mean to set up the events and different powers in this world. I hope you add it to your library stay with the story in future. The story might progress at even complicated and greater overlapping level as the Synopsis suggests, nonetheless it will be Intriguing once you catch the outline.

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    Werewolf fate: The love is eternal, so the war is
    Fantasia · Spacewarrior17
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Respondeu a meixiaolian

    haha just a different attempt 😂 I still have to revise it several times.

    Ch 2 Song (The war melody)
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    Werewolf fate: The love is eternal, so the war is
    Fantasia · Spacewarrior17
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Postado

    "hahaha...." He laughed at the pathetic character. A writer who just writes and his writing is so bad that the viewers feel like they wasted their time to even check out the synopsis. As he laughed, tears began to fall down from his eyes, and he choked in the middle of his laugh and began to cry... cause he wasn't laughing at the character in the Novel, he was laughing at himself. "This is such a terrible writing style. ooofff... I am not going anywhere with this." I said to myself as I saved my half-ass prologue and closed the Tab without saving.

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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasia · meixiaolian
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    That is the problem of a desperate guy like me 😂

    I sighed as I read the reviews being posted on my novel, I hovered my mouse and click on my profile to see any improvements. Seeing the number of people removing my book from their library and the reading stats of my book went down, all of my books weren't good enough to be noticed by everyone. If not noticed, they aren't good enough to read.
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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasia · meixiaolian
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    I cringed so much on myself hahha

    "It's great, readers were supporting on my works. They love it" I lied.
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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasia · meixiaolian
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    for the last time Johny, it is pronounced sutle not sub-tle

    Few cars beeped against other's cars, trying to beat the traffic, and subtle chatters of students were heard as I passed by them, what a noisy hot day to go outside. I halted on my tracks and went inside a cream white with navy blue trim convenience store-- Oak Street's 24- Hour Convenience Store
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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasia · meixiaolian
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    haha 😶 TT TT TT 😭 It takes me a whole day to focus and write a chapter.

    Este número foi suprimido.
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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasia · meixiaolian
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    Why you have to bring it up? 😢 are you mocking me?😡 jk, I know it's same for all of us😔 but it also depends on our writing style and mine is terrible😂

    Este número foi suprimido.
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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasia · meixiaolian
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    I don't want to be a top writer, just an admirable writer whose words can both satisfy their desire through my words and convince my way of life.

    Este número foi suprimido.
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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasia · meixiaolian
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Postado

    I'm giving it a 4.4 star and I'm giving you actual down points in comments only, because I think this book has potential to grow and by that time I might not get the chance to review so thoroughly once more when it will get pilled up inside the bundles of webnovel 😅 This book is quite different from the cliche Werewolf storys that I often find everywhere, and I seriously don't like those... A Plus point is that this story is completely set in different world, which gives author an advantage to mold the world background more freely, and I like it. ... what is a slight downpoint is that, ahem.. I'm also writing a book in similar genre and I'm also a newbie who is terrible in English language, so don't take it personally... I find it a little hard to catch the words, paragraphs and there intended meanings, so consider trying to write things that can be understandable by mass readers without racking there brain. (webnovel is supposed to be easy to read)

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    Rightful Vengeance
    Fantasia · Samantha_R_Samuel
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    Tbh, I'm not an expert myself but I'm a good reader, This chapter is not exactly entertaining, nonetheless I liked it and it's intriguing me somehow.

    Ch 2 Once Upon A Time...
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    Rightful Vengeance
    Fantasia · Samantha_R_Samuel
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Postado

    ahem.....! I just want to say, this is the best thing that ever happened to Webnovel after the comic adaptation of Release that witch. I have always wanted to see the comic version of LTHP...

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    Library of Heaven's Path
    · Webnovel Comics
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Respondeu a Curium255

    nahhh

    "Very well. We will sit back and only watch for now. However, if it gets out of hand, then we will have to intervene."
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    Dual Cultivation
    Oriental · MyLittleBrother
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Respondeu a Vanadhi_Lucia

    battle through the heavens...🐱

    "Who the fuck he thinks he is? Of course being chosen by Erossu Book means you have big D! And with its special cultivation, the little brother will pierce the heavens!"
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    Master Of Erossu Book
    Oriental · InsanelyParanoid
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    okay, but why am I getting so many Novel invitation 😂 I can't have a time to read all this 😭

    Este número foi suprimido.
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    Re-Birth of a Genius. Creator/Destroyer
    Fantasia · Suryaboddu
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    I have been Invited here to Read🙂, I will consider it reading because of the YURI tag😌

    It has been a whole week since I got this fever and it is just continuing to get worse. I've been living a pretty normal slow life, working at a mini-market close to home, living with my parents, enjoying video games, and Japanese media.
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasia · PancakesWitch
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    Hmm.. looks interesting, but have you tried to explain the beginning of the apocalypse in later chapters. It would have looked more interesting and intriguing, if partially revealed in a prologue with a little cliffhanger things. you know...!

    Ch 1 This Is SAO With Extra Steps  || The Introduction
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    Daily Life Trapped in a Zombie VR Game
    Jogos · Anotoki
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  • Spacewarrior17
    Spacewarrior173yr
    Comentou

    go!

    Este número foi suprimido.
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    Daily Life Trapped in a Zombie VR Game
    Jogos · Anotoki
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