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A pretty fun fic. Mc is op in an interesting way. I do like how it does not feel preachy at all. I also like how change is being done.

He is one of the only people that can make healing potions, and he is a beginner. He has the upper hand. Yes, they can kill him but if they do they lose a potentially steady supply of healing potions. They'd have to pay the phenex families's absurd fees. His potential and current value can not be overlooked. Another rias can be birthed. Another him can't.

THX FOR CHAP

It is a pretty fun read. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. I feel like by just improving on them, this fanfic will grow. I like the power set and while mc is powerful, he isn't yet op, although it might feel like it. Honestly, I wish you would focus a bit on background and world-building because we still haven't met tony stark even though he invested in mcs company and the mc is a potts. Also, what happened to the hydra spy that is his maid or something(I forgot her position)? Overall its a fun story and its a fanfic so...five stars

Its not a bad story. It has a lot of potential. I like the ideas and the character himself. Its pretty good. If there were any problems, it would be that you tell more than show. If you improve on that then the story would be even better. The ideas are there. Its a fanfic so five stars i guess.

i love your work

This is just a pretty fun read in general. The character is done pretty well. I like the pacing and the updates are consistent. I really like the story. I hope that you keep it up.

This is fun. I'm loving the personality of the characters. I can feel the distinctness of each. The writing formatting isn't my favorite and could potentially be improved upon more but, I like it. This story has a lot of potential and I hope you continue and improve.

He's not childish. He just doesn't care. Nothing can really harm him so why should he? If he gets stabbed, he heals and he can practically get ifinitely stronger through a multitude of ways. At that point I would do what Saitama does and look for a real fight or try and fix things because I know that I can't die. But, we are allowed to have different opinions and perspectives and so we're probably both somewhat right though, I like my opinion more.

To awaken the mangekyou, you have to kill the person closest to you. People can lose people but, the mangekyou is hatred itself. Madara got it when he killed his brother. For Sasuke, it was the same. It is not bloodline purity, it is pure unadultered hate and malice.(Sorry for my spelling.)