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Good work 👍

I'm not a fan of multiverse stories or going to multiple worlds. However I give them a chance when I come across them. This one is actually really good. The comedy is nothing that will have you laughing out loud but I constantly had a smile reading chapters. The story in the beginning was alright but the development has proven this Author is improving and will hopefully keep improving. Character design is good some are obviously side characters and the main characters have their own obvious personalities that stick out. The world building is good for the main world, however because he goes to multiple worlds you really can't build too much or the chapters will feel like filler. The main world has enough background and story that it's good.

Keep up the good work!

The grammar is a little messy. However the story is not bad. I feel like it jumps around too much and sometimes you don't know what the MC is doing. The story is interesting however, the story does not do a good job of portraying how people look or how they are feeling. Overall rough translation but worth the read to pass time or for entertainment.

Very good. Keep up the good work.

Really excited to see what chaos comes next.

I'm very interested in this conspiracy about the massacre 6 years ago. Does anyone have any ideas or maybe Author can give a little hint? [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Very good story. Fights are well written. Emotions displayed very well. The system is good and helps keep track of everything because it would be a lot without it. The writing has almost zero mistakes and the transitions are smooth. The only thing that could potentially ruin this story is if it turns into politics.

Please keep up the good work.

I wouldn't say top tier quality but so far chapters are pretty good. Transitions are good and emotions are properly portrayed. Take your time no need to rush and get sloppy. Could you give us some ideas on how you plan to move forward. Also either of the girls in this chapter could get a peak at MC showering in the future. Just an idea and more space for humor or cringe