TheSystemFan

The mc seems pretty weak for having powers of Thor. Bullets shouldn't do anything to him and only Homelander may be able to hurt him.

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Really liked this story. Most of the stories here are not so well written but this is not the case here. Also shows some realistic development without any cheats or golden finger.

So the language seems flowery and long winded.

I was reading 1st chapter but hit in the face with a block of words. It was incoherent and difficult to read.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter. Though the flowery language seems a bit too much

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapters. His hero name could be Apex.