Imperial_Fox

that's why the MC is stupid, he spent 99% of his money on something that didn't come from a reputable place or with a guarantee. that alone is reason enough to drop this fanfic.

Nahh, the story feels like it's being purposefully dragged on, there could have been so much plot progression yet it didn't happen. pacing is all over the place. sorry, but it's a drop.

just transferred from one forceful system to another, I don't see any point

you stalling too much, story hasn't progressed anywhere in the last 10 chapters

forced system is way too annoying, if you don't remove it, the novel will be dead faster than death

You saved me time bruh, thanks

It's pretty shitty. MC got scammed the first chapter and didn't even try to get his money back. stayed on the backfoot like a bitch. his mentality is also weak. waste of time. 1/5

nice

nah man, you're just stalling with this type of writing, you described the same scene thrice and wasted nearly 800 words in this chapter over something that could have been used for actual story progression. the more I read it, the more it becomes clear that you are using AI to write this story without actually putting much into it. really, it's becoming AI slop gradually