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I write this novel just to see if maybe I can make writting a side job and still enjoy what I do.
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whose speeking right now?, it's so confusing !!!
i was unable to understand anything from the conversation it doesn't mâles any sense , sometime we know whose speeking sometime we don't you use coma AT thé start of a conversation but forget to use another one once the caractère finish talking. And i can't make sensé or what th MC is talking about when he's thinking or talking since you use or not coma " " , depending on hiw you feel and it makes it impossible to want to read even if it looks interresting. I skipped most or the whole chapter since it was so much of a headache to understand what was happening, with Time laps and all that
ahahaha, thats's some simple minded people its's refreshing Reading those type lf character, Hope she get Time to develop her character
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how Can he be Homeless if he has the house of his parent?, doesn't make sense
seriously do you hear even what you're saying yourself sigh
its'sa chinese nouvel of course there isn't Logic
here WE go boys, that's it finally something that looks Real, when you push too much timide people there réalisations IS wonderful and crazy
yeah for sûre you proof how much you can't make an argument without insulting people
Lol, here i was trying to have a discussion and all you find to have a débuté is carlingue other dumb sigh, then start talking then
yeah but then tell me do you think rich people when they use a lot of money for trivial thingd do they think it's a lot for them, or it's the poor thinking that
i'm disappointed in you Author, to think that this type of skill would pop out twice prove you don't even try to innovate and your plot focus is just wishfulfillment
the character building is so shallow, that it doesn't explain why it's excalate so fast, and why she would accept so easily not even trying to stop him and just accepting it