okay I just finished one more but I have to say 4 chapters should be my limit for a week I have to say this novel might not be lucky with getting more views but at least compared to my other novels time posting mor chapters

story is in initial stages to be fair I am not spending too much time on this one probably one or two chapters every week I have another novel where I am taking out around 4 chapters of week and for this novel description I'm really bad with that after 6 month I have finally able to get a description for my man novel this one was created because I was little angry when I ask what would be a better story iron man in MHA or doctor faith in MHA then I got ban from the server

that remind me to try my second novel if you want it's main character isn't about revenge so I am just waiting casually it's Doctor Fate in MHA

both want revenge it's also a great way to change his character and saving some cute girls always at last point for Hermione grangers are views will also change after seeing that stupid world and see my at least make some plans for im

yp if you want to pick up a girls this is the best place for him since he just need to stop them for growing and give it them healing and helping someone to get Revenge I think it would be a nice change

just for numbers I plan to get from werewolf girls and some girls form black bullet army of little girl sounds cute

yp it will depend on their chemistry at least I have to wait for 3rd year for her to grow little feelings she can be someone who could stop him for doing stupid things like stopping his plan to destroy the village let's say he have a book of seal he can cast a magic which can kept the secret and make everyone forget about every Ninja to recorded there that would be a perfect revenge for stealing Ninja technique of his clan

you can share your suggestions

I hope you would continue story if you have suggestions

since Harry Potter world have same rules as our world I'm using the same reaction someone could join you for some money or some benefit making fall in love it's depend on mcs on character and how much effort he puts

thank you for the great review why I would like to know if you could tell me about the latest chapter since the writing style has been little bit modified and the speed was also increase when writing them

it's hard for me to identify most of problems you know in first chapter for 6th month didn't even know there was a line which were two times said in first chapter most of my story get destroyed don't know if my quality chapter is increasing or decreasing the only problem I can identify is dialogue examples, MC said while frowning, MC side smiling I am also working on 2 new novels using the experience of this novel

the reason is clear first is his age it's only 14 year old first chapter did clear his training very hard but he was also worried one attacking of Naruto to unlocking ninetale mode and learning sage mode so he attack early age of 14 but Naruto still able to learn them due to the stage of six path, and he has not that stupid he had his Kaleidoscope ability is to control time and reality manipulation mirchi always safe for final fight as a backup, I know I didn't explain in early chapter lots of thing very clearly but when he goes back from Harry Potter world and other world's I do plan to give little glams office thoughts and journey writing might be bad but when I write his character I did prepare lots reasoning for every action

both just waiting for his character to settle down

😭 thanks to peoples like you who are still commenting I'm still writing

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Goddess of beauty form it's wrong place And Goddess of wisdom from Godslayer is also a good option if mc going to avatar world could be a short spiritual journey For his character development like even if he wants to destroy the Ninja World he shouldn't treat himself that badly After all revenge should be not about making yourself miserable I think fairy tale would be able to fill the Trust issue There is also a cordless in Naruto world but I plan for her to start as a week person atleast for first few years

for kin maker half maid and half Ninja but haven't found the solid reason

the system is more about giving in opportunity what he previously lack for kin for short time I am going to ignore then start developing her I already know that I am not that great of water who can't handle multiple characters in same time such better to give time to allow to character at one time what's the first year ends I am thinking in two direction one is he could go back to in Naruto world and bring more characters or he could go to new world and bring new characters

I plan to find him a goddess who could help him form it's wrong to pick up girls in dungeon they are lots of goddess. get him some like minded peoples who wants to become strong or have some similar intentions for learning magic I would say black magic is best for his revenge and I plan him to learn lots of magic which would be useful now I am going to start let him build his reputation let him start teaching others