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with an app like wattpad, where i expect at best a 4/10 experience, i am happy to say that this is one of the best fanfiction i have ever read, i am sad to see that you haven't updated in two months. however, you should feel proud of what you have made here. alltogether, I'd say this is a 9/10 experience in fanfiction (i have over 1500 fanfiction favorited/read between all sights) and 7/10 as far as books go. keep it up, you have what a great skill.
ok writing but annoying amount of chapters are just advertisements or dumb questions, the author is pandering to his readers more then developing his story, he also asks questions to his readers for the smallest thing slowing down the story, its obvious this is all just a way for him to get more patreon subs.
then stop saying it?
just... dont
SIMMMMMMMMMMMMMP
"The shadow clone finally ran out of chakra and dispelled itself"
THIS IS DISCRIMINATION!
this
The worst possible kind of situation, your really F'ed up this time gojo, this is why you never let the Oppai lead you astray
...A GAME THEORY
its prolly cause hes constantly destroying his body and rebuilding it
my biggest worry would be ruining the temper on the swords