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Props to Feebling for exposing in chapter 6 comments.
This is stolen from The Engulfing Silence from fanfiction.net It’s orginal name is Naruto: Shifts in Life
The story doesn’t have a plot anymore imo it’s aimless and I feel like it would’ve been better if it were anywhere else but that world.
Chapter: 34 Writing Quality: it is very easy to digest and there isn’t any errors from what I can see Updating: I don’t know Story Development: it’s kinda slow imo but it still hooks you in Character design: the characters I’ve seen are much but they are portrayed as intelligent enough for you not stress about the details. World Background: the world hasn’t been explored much but I am just getting to the main plot rn Overall: I would recommend to anyone who is a fan of Journey to the West and the litrpg genre