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A rondure or a palisade, your everything enclosed. Outside, an abysm, the looming consternation of insignificance.
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Yea… That’s honestly fair. I more specifically meant my father tho. He most definitely has the money to afford things but still does this anyway
Yea, the first sentence is absolutely a run-on. Needs to be made into multiple sentences.
Ah yes, the most important of experiments and totally not a plot device so obviously erected by the author to drive the reason for the mc’s hatred of humanity.
Dont think any sane human thinks like that but sure
I cant wait to be dissapointed once again :)
I certainly didn’t
*you’re
Also, the natural process of Phloria’s character development in this novel has always seemed unnatural to me. how does she go from a spoilt brat when lith first met her, to the “most grown up” out of all the main characters, especially when she has little no no life experiences which may facillitate this delicate but arduous process. It makes no sense to me and it feels completely artificial! The author manufactured this grown up character as a plot device to move lith’s character along on the path towards redemption. What a complete flop!
And also, I do see a therapist and not for any reason you might believe. I’m not an evil person nor am I sadistic or morally abhorrent in any way. i simply have strong feelings toward certain characters that often are inflamed by their actions and the knowing author sitting behind them. i would be a bit more understanding if these were real events as there would be no grand orchestrator behind them. However, there is and it makes it all the worse when i think about some of the sh*t he has writeen in this novel.
Perhaps killing her is a bit overreactive, I just wish she was... Different. Even after reading another few hundred chapters she doesn’t get better in anyway that counts and the author even makes it worse by throwing some random woman into the mix. Completely useless plotwise and is a literal plaything for lith so that he can feel “normal”. Needless to say i dropped this novel at around chapter 600 and don’t plan on coming back. The author is disagreeable and prideful about his work which is a nasty combination. It makes one resistant to constructive criticism and outright hateful towards destructive criticism. I’ve talked to him on Discord before and that’s how I’ve deduced this.
Well, I’m glad the free chapters ended here and not 10 chapters ago when i was still heavily invested in this novel. This chapter pretty much ruined it for me. The mc doesn’t need obligations like a dam pet to distract him. It adds senseless fluff to the story and contributes to an overall more boring reading experience. This isn’t suppossed to be a slice of life story why is this plot point here? Oh yeah, because the chinese authors want to drag out the story as long as possible to make as much monay as they possibly can. Huh, what a crazy thought...
Waste it on another useless skill. -_-
Coming back to this a year later, that second sentence in my original comment sounds incredibly snarky. I apologize and I did not mean it to come out that way at all, I merely wanted to prove the validity of my statement.
Why are you everywhere lol
In what way is this emulative of real life? Ugh, this novel is a low effort dumpster fire that i should have realized, because it is on this cursed site, that it never had a chance to be good in the first place.
Honestly though, I thought i was the only one
If you can’t even afford the latest iphone, do you even deserve to live? 🧐
Literally no one cares about these pointless details. We readers do have brains believe it or not and can probably guess these details based solely off context clues.
How are people absolutely okay with this atrocious quality of writing? It is literally boring me to tears! This novel is a cool concept for sure (I wouldn’t have picked it up otherwise) but the lazy chains of mediocrity and rushed writing drag this great concept down and makes it equal with the rest of the trash that makes up 90% of this app.