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Aye my guy went to Joburg.

Mini Review: This novel has potential. The story may seem a bit rushed in the early chapters, but is made up with the mc learning new spells, leveling up, and other tasks his system gives him. Mc seems very lustful, but still thinks logical about whats going to happen about the acations he chooses. He also seems to not be hindered by killing others in his early stages of life. Couldn’t write a lot, commenting on my phone.

Thanks for the c h a p t e r

Thanks for the chapter

Authour, The novel is off to a great start. But I would suggest to add breaks or soemthing to show the reader when the mc isn’t speaking anymore. But other than that great chapter. Hope you write more. 😁

5.4 inches flacid?

Exp

From chapter 1 till now its been some funny shit. This is one awesome book sadly its blocked behind a paywall.