An0nymous

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Everything changed when the fire nation attacked

thanks! I'll sure try!

Thank you for considering my novel! I'm honoured, but I'll need some time to think about what I should do since this is only my hobby. Thanks again!

I just edited the parts before the time dilation, I'm so glad that I at least improved! I mean it when I say thank you so much! I usually don't get replies especially stuff that'd help me improve so I'm sure this will be a great motivator for me. Have a nice day or night haha

Honestly, I agree with you there. I need to get better at not making things confusing, it can be very frustrating reading that. If you don't mind, I have a question, is the first 3-4 chapters better than the later ones? I edited it and I wanted to know if it's still as flawed

Thank you for letting me know. I can see the problem you mentioned too and I'll try my best to improve on that! I'm sorry you feel that way, I still have a lot to improve on so I'll consider this every time I write. Thanks for the compliment on the plot and I'll definitely practice making everything feel less forced :)

I see... sure! I'll make sure to edit it asap!

What's that?

Too relatable