Saltybolty

This novels is average at best, grammar is horrendous with stiff and boring dialogue. what annoys me is that the author removes reviews below 4 stars...

May I ask for the Raw Name?

Not likely, if he could actually 'Predict' events he would most likely be put under watch or straight up dissected

Honestly this book lacks soul, or in simpler terms it's very mechanical and doesn't flow well, the conversations are extremely stiff and boring. character personality are pretty bad and sloppy. I was excited to read a new romance book where the mc is male but sadly this isnt really a novel it feels more like a script there no emotion and the character themselves He Fang and the mc are extremely boring and have basically no personality

Honestly, I was looking forward to reading this novel and it greatly disappointed me. You're thrown right into the book without any introduction or build up. Theres practice no logic. like how did he end up meeting the Duke? how does he buy weapons and arms from earth? (no description or story of the actual earth) MC is really concieted and quite stupid. if you want something that has actual sense and world devotion read empress gigglo (Mc has the power to transfer between world and uses it to improve that worlds civilisation)

Seriously, there is a lack of necromancy stories and even if they do they are a minor plot armour such as having a skeleton puppet or just soul searching

Same here, I only recently started reading tech/magic novels can you recommend some?

Honestly, it's just a little patriotic if the author is good and considers nations history etc... besides the one they were born and raised in, it's good for example World Online although you may say it favours china of course it does but if you look how the author portrays America and England you can see that he tries to balance everything out. but come on would you end up reading a kingdom building novel if the mc is on losing side? and weak? nope you wouldn't so it doesn't really matter. the only thing that puts me off usually is the racism between china and Japan. but I usually find Korean novels even more racist, ones I've read so far have alot of supremacy in it

Overall I'm only reading this because I'm bored. The writing itself is passable however the story lacks depth (Description of the surroundings/world and the character himself) its literally Ayaan does that and this theres no background what so ever. Although I said the english is passable, would be nice to have the author or an editor to recheck the chapters and make it more smoothly. Only read 30 chapters so far, but it's a brainless read for me.

... Not gonna lie, you had me in the first half