_Morpheos_

Creo que lo dejare aqui, parecia divertida al principio pero no hay nada mas que ver a mi parecer, es solo el protagonista haciendo algunas cosas, hablando con algunos personajes y ya esta, no es divertida, no digo que este mal escrita, pero es aburrido. Creo que ya llevo dos meses leyendo esto y sinceramente me aburrio, la espera no vale la pena.

Se va notando como poco a poco el "escritor" va usando mas y mas Chat GTP, no estoy en contra de eso, pero se nota demasiado ademas de que Lucifer no se siente como Lucifer

Full chat gtp

It disgusts me, repugnance, hate, I just hate when they try to speak like Japanese, god reminds me of when I was an Otaku.

Honestly, I find it hard to empathize with the characters. It's not the first time I've read a plot like this, but normally they focus more on the process and the result of what is being created. Here the characters don't have a remarkable appearance or personality, so they feel more like a nuisance than anything else. I hope it gets better in the future.

The characters say a lot of rude things, in a matter of chapters that resource is going to be spent.

Me da risa esta version miniaturizada de Carrie

1.- la calidad de escritura es normal, no es muy detallista con los entornos o personajes y sus transfondos, pero no te quita la imaginación detallando cada átomo de su cuerpo. 2.- buena actualización :) 3.- no ha llegado a nada por ahora pero tiene buen ritmo. 4.- un defecto que tiene es la poca información que muestra de los personajes, asumiendo que uno los conoce en primer lugar, esto depende del personaje, no todos. 5.- pense en un principio que el Universo se iba a ir a la mierda en el capitulo 10, ahora parece que podrian coexistir. Buena historia.

1.- It seems to be written at the same time that you are watching an episode of Rick and Morty, everything goes very fast and there is little general information about the place or environment. 2.- in chapter 3 it seems to be in the third person but it is being written in the first person, which is disconcerting, is the boy omnipresent? Or is it you, I don't know. 3.-This is more personal, I don't know how old the author is, but the Smith family and especially Rick are not good people, they are all defective in themselves, Rick is infinitely intelligent but that does not make him an idolizable character, nor does Beth , Jerry is normal, not an idiot, he is normal in my opinion, an average American. The story has its flaws but is readable within the standard.

I have a problem with this kind of story in which everything is given to the protagonist on a silver platter, I don't get through a single chapter after the first 5 of fillers and the protagonist is already a multi-millionaire, I don't want to think afterwards what he'll do with the copy of Cortana. I will wait for another chapter and change the result