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No it is not, in the nuances.
He Tristan considering that it is his responsibility to kill Boyd if he doesn’t control his bloodlist well? Even Tristan wouldn’t allow a murder machine run wild, especially if he created said murder machine.
Okay how can you delete comments? xD
A km takes minutes? Top spped of a hawk is 120 mp/h (Not all of them), but this is a wind hawk in common lvl so lets say 120; x 1.6 : 3.6= 53 m/s It takes 20 seconds max even if you forget that it’s almost awakened and that the wind element would probably make its speed higher then 120 mp/h
This js just annoying. You made him excessively stupid with ignoring things he himself accepted as good information after the smallest things happend. Only to build up to this ‘enlightenment`.
Idk what you plan to do with your novel? First you make the character feel he is guaranteed dead by bad education. Make him remember that important bit of info he got from that cop and afterwards you also focus in on the tip from the blacksmith. While you have all this PLUS not needing beast cores other then money since he gets soul cores. You make the guy greedy af. I get naivety, but we clearly sherd past the layer where he was so naïve to follow this along.
I’d have* or the odd I’d’ve
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Yay a 2 in 1 chapter split in 3 chapters.
Now that you have gotten us curious, keep us informed if you remember the name!
Curse thingy
0.3 cm thick
or Unscientific beast training 1.0
Unscientific beast taming 2.0
Most needs to be many.*
Let’s just interpet it with India also having 'more' since he said most.
If you can learn a spell 5th years have trouble you ofc be good enough for an outstanding.
You have been updating inconsistently recently and uploading way less. Is it exams or something?
You were saying there were a dozen of merchants a day coming for his items. Such action wouldn’t require 10 gaurds per person since quite a few use the same route. Using the same route merchants would then go group together to make the trip more profitable. Or you are telling me there were 400 guests dayly?
I was starting to like this story in the beginning and sorry for complaining so much, but this guy has a save the world mentality placing all blame on himself if he doesn’t go spend every second helping others.