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2019-06-30 UnidoPhilippines
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  • Rawr
    Rawra year ago
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    haaa how should I start. Well to be honest, this novel, at the start, came out strong and interesting. The whole concept of a necromancer and druid fusion was interesting and the application of abilities of both classes was decent. But as all good things do, the decency of the novel fell flat, especially when the second arc starts.Let's talk firstly about our dear old MC, Matthew. One word, cardboard cutout. Theres's really no emotion that can be perceived from the MC, he has no hobbies other than planting, he has no clear goals, morals, and anything. He is literally just a cardboard cutout, his character is simple and crude. We can simply describe him as: he loves trees, he dislikes romance, and that's basically all his major points. Compared to other MCs, he frequently doesn't ponder over things, his reactions are mundane and all in all boring. Now let's move on with his transmigration, it is revealed that he's far from the first transmigrator and that hes'slike the 120th? Other than that his cheat is pretty good but not totally overpowered, which I really like. It's not some deus ex machina where he can rise from weakest to strongest in a matter of a year, but rather acts as a support to easen his growth and provide a path for him to take.Following that is the world-building. Oh boy this is a shit storm. Let me begin by saying that his world is an absolute fuckery. We have other continents, other planes, other worlds, and more. The big problem is that the world is so abnormally large that any cohesive understanding cannot be made especially since the author gives details on a chaotic manner. Oh there's a continent other then Aindor? Cool. Oh wait so you're telling me that there's also other worlds and a dead galactic empire? Ok. Oh wait there are also domains and dimensions meant for races? Like the arcane wilderness? But there's also a real for the undead? Then a realm made by gods? Then a continent for the Su (Chinese equivalent). Holy shit there's a ton and not one was properly explained EVEN AINDOR CONTINENT, THE CONTINENT WHERE HE'S STAYING. It's such a weird fucked up shit of a world that if properly explained, can actually clear many things and set up a better world building.World History, imo I really like the 3 locks that Matthew introduced. The story of the scourged mage was also decent and I know that the further we progress, the better we can understand.Now let's talk about the second arc, the arc where he tries to find the Su inheritance of balance or some shit. Goddamn this arc was tedious, it made me quit for several times since it directed the story out of the trees and unbearable characters are introduced, especially that bard Lorraine.anyways read at your own risk.

  • Rawr
    Rawr3 years ago
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    After reading the raws (up to chap 300) I'm quite disappointed. I'm an avid fan of beast taming novels and this one made me feel sad for how the writing quality deteriorated from the beginning. He actually became a Gary Sue. Shi Yu easily fixed every problem that he faced. No hardship whatsoever. The only think that kept me going is the evolution patterns of his beasts. He kept getting stronger and stronger, most materials for evolution were handed out to him by the Gem Cat and even Eleven finished 3 inscriptions after meeting the Turtle of Emperor Wu. I didn't see him struggling that much. He constantly made research discoveries from the Iron eating beasts to the Green Cotton worms. He contracted a high level overlord heroic spirit in an instant, you can even say that even though he had a test. He still easily passed it. There a lot of other scenes like these in the novel where he is basically the darling of the universe and all things go in his way. There are also a lot of anime references. From the heroic spirits, dragon ball, and reincarnated as a slime. Honestly, at first I was not bothered but I really dislike how the author almost copied all the concepts. Emperor Shidi had built a ruin where you can contact Heroic Spirits of the past, a strong purification totem reincarnated as a slime, and a dragon ball appeared that helped woth buggy's evolution. Lastly, I really dislike how outrageous the novel is. For example, when he went into the Dragon Palace he created a department. Oh, he also defeated the 2nd and 3rd prince of the dragon palace. Currently, he even decided yo create a movie. He also sucked the time ruin in imperial university. Cracked emperor Wu's ruin. And many more. And all of the characters reaction are always "I've never seen anything like this" or "all beasts and humans are stunned and shocked" the fact that he can ALWAYS shock totem level beasts are outrageous and repitative. Honestly, the start was good but the writing went downhill. I'm hoping that the author don't do these things in the future. I don't knlw what I'm writing but I'm just really dissatisfied with how the novel had become.

  • Rawr
    Rawr4 years ago
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    Overall I really like the novel however please if there will be any sort of romance please don't make the FL a damsel in distress make her as strong or stronger than Ajax because weak FL are shitty Thank you for the hard work Author!