Kamatis
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Kamatis4 years agoRespondeu a Mel_AnivSure why not? I dont use It anyway
- Kamatis4 years agoPostado
The emotions being portrayed are raw and visceral and I believe that heavily lies at the narrative... Having a good narrative, would mean having a better flow of story, character's emotions etc. And that's what I noticed the most when reading your story... It's not exactly vivid but the words and sentence being used made the story flow more efficiently... I appreciate the narrative... Keep up the good work
- Kamatis4 years agoPostado
Narrative can still be improved, but I think the selling point of this book is how the characters are written... Like seriously, the characters are so easily liked and lovable... To the point that you feel like they're real... Ofc, they ain't real but maybe... just maybe... they could be real... Anyways, keep up the good work
- Kamatis4 years agoPostado
Just to be honest, I don't really like the story... I apologize about that... So I'm gonna talk about what enthralled me the most at your novel... Yes, It's the poetic narrative... I don't know If you intended that but I noticed some references to famous poetry like Flowers Of Evil... Or maybe It's just me, interpreting It that way because I'm messed up in the head or what
- Kamatis4 years agoPostado
Easily lovable characters? ☑️ Exploring narrative? ☑️ Craftily paranormal tale? ☑️ All in all, It's a really good book and experience as well for me... Sorry If my review is like this because I'm in a hurry to prepare for work... keep up the good work btw
- Kamatis4 years agoPostado
This story is really good, just to be honest... Your typical harem bullshitery turned to something amazing and palpable... But what amazed me the most are not the characters, pacing, or world building... It's the narrative... The author writes the story with vivid imagination and detailed narrations... leaving the readers with desire to read more... Anyways, this is a good book and keep up the good work
- Kamatis4 years agoPostado
I'm so very sorry about the late review... I asked you for a review swap last September but something bad happened so I completely forgot to write your reviews as well as update my work(Seriously) Moving on, I only read about 10 chapters, I hope, you dont mind me reading just 10 chapters... Well, the narrative are actually quite detailed resulting for a vivid description of what feeling you have at their world but downside is... You don't let the readers think about what's happening, constantly feeding them with information well... Anyways, overall, the characters are all written with impact and from what I can see, this is already a finished work so the updating should be stars... Best of luck to you, mate
- Kamatis4 years agoPostado
Yow, your story was good, gonna tell you that... The vocabulary and use of words are good and definitely worth the praise... But what enchants me the most is the huge world... Yes, the terrific world building slowly built as the chapters advance... (One of the reasons I love the Fantasy genre but hates making one myself... Yes, world-building... my weak point...) Anyways, the world building is great and gonna expect more chapters to come... Keep up the good work, author
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