Everton_Mason

Unnecessary chapter, wrote a little drama with the story of the boy naruto, it's just garbage, being that it's not faithful to the story, everything has changed and it's not the mc, which leads me to think that the garbage will come from 'mc influenced by emotions of your self before waking up'. Amateur to the extreme.

ehehehe I feel like I've read this beginning hundreds of times.... wait... I really read it hundreds of times (-_-') ..... the bad thing about these fanfics is that they are so generic and copied, they all end up incomplete with less than 100 chapters, no one seems to take naruto seriously to make a good fanfic without the I want this plus this and that system.

what a bore huh, it's already boring these words after anime sentences like naruto - dattebayo or arinska from overlord, however it's one thing to be in japanese audio, now, written for westerners, it's just nonsense, it ruins the reading ...

it was obvious that there will always be a delay in the final moment... typical reader-bait plot, author treating the reader like a fish... I've seen many xinxias like this. You have to read until the end for a total romantic dishonor. Besides that this mc is pretty disgusting, if you analyze well, he won everything for free without effort, and still doesn't have much personality, despite being in the category of romances nominated for men, it's clearer a female domination with a dubious emaciated mc .

because the author has no ideas of his own... this book is a compilation of clichés that he copies from other books that he copied from other books.. in short, no one is original on this site....

cliché of the cliché.... I've been reading novels for 8 years and this is the most common one, as people insist on copying authors rather than making their own success. The naive mc who is naive and dies.... young naive of engagement body.... engagement goal... catchphrase promising to get revenge. ... ''How innovative I have never seen this before'' irony.

you didn't read what I wrote, or are you pretending to be silly?, I clearly explained that he writes separate scenes as if there was a line between them, that is, to flow and have a continuous reading that you understand all the parts as one, you would need to integrate them. If you don't understand that, go to the big stool.

I left other opinions here, but the more I read, the more generic and bad it becomes, besides having many ways to strengthen yourself and overcome battle power to fight with people of higher level, here there is a pointless thing of battle prowess that has no basis, besides, a disgusting thing is that the mc responds to provocations and acts arrogant because he was someone of heavenly level, but the only people who suffer are the people related to him, no one has a good ending or is free of humiliation and death relating to the mc.

the restaurant only has one table, right, even if all tables were full, they would soon choose the mc, an academy student, instead of another ...... this author is practically a total xinxia plagiarist. Not even a little bit of originality, at least a little.............

Also, never expect the mc to have a higher power, he is always under power than his current enemies. A very naughty technique this, used by authors to have the moment 'underestimating mc' 'slaps in the face', don't be fooled by its divine techniques and immortal base, much of it is just name and gets lost on the way. He is hailed as a fast cultivator, but makes up for lost time, never outruns enemies, is always 'above the extras' 'below the enemies'.