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Aliiireza

Aliiireza

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2019-06-22 UnidoIran
14.1h

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  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza14 days ago
    Comentou

    When you start reading a novel, at first you don't care how much the name China or nationalism is mentioned, but little by little, you start to feel the writing style of Chinese authors, and you become sensitive to the words China, East, etc. (Google translation)

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza14 days ago
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    One of the best Harry Potter novels I've read so far is the first one, so it's hard to say exactly what problems it has now, is it for the period of his childhood and the shaping of his character and will it end or will it continue as he grows up? It's one of the bad novels. The problems I think are that you show a very positive character, not that being positive is a problem. Every two chapters you say there should be justice, equality, I should help everyone, I should protect my loved ones, and.... You don't have to have a negative character who doesn't care about anything, but you don't have to repeat it until you're tired. Whether that's a good or bad thing, I think novels are good so far that don't repeat a topic too much. Saying once that I have to protect my loved ones is enough. You don't have to repeat it in every paragraph, or it has to be justice. Maybe if you didn't say this in every sentence, your story would be good without any problems. (Google Translate)

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza16 days ago
    Postado

    The original author himself has half wasted this, you want to translate it half, what's the point. Let's not forget that the more it goes, the smaller the bag will be. You can translate this novel, at least it is finished. (Google translation)

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza16 days ago
    Postado

    Oh, good idea, stupid MC, it's ruined. In a tower or dungeon, do you make a law prohibiting killing or murdering? Isn't that what you put in the kindergarten, a black hole, meaning that out of every 100 people who enter there, at least 10 people die, 90 others get a reward. And then you go and invite someone to come there, as if it's a play city where anyone can come, wait, over time the crowd will come, when the news is out, you don't need to invite anyone. Then you go and talk to the people who came, how is it easier to leave the floor behind and talk to each other like friends? You're an idiot, you're the owner of the tower, not the tower guide, to behave like this. Now how does he behave after that? I couldn't bear to continue. (Google translation)

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza18 days ago
    Postado

    If you can write Karl's name, which is his body name, Lin, when you are in a western world, the Chinese insist on keeping a Chinese name, why is it that you are translating? (Google translation)

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza6 months ago
    Postado

    Do you know another fan that has britney in it or not? You translated very well, thank you for it (Google Translate)... .‌..................................................................................................

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza7 months ago
    Respondeu a blackest9th

    Read it carefully. I wrote it. I can't remember the name.

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza7 months ago
    Respondeu a emjason

    Scholar’s Advanced Technological System

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza7 months ago
    Respondeu a UniverseM007

    I don't know, I didn't continue reading it

  • Aliiireza
    Aliiireza10 months ago
    Postado

    99% is a copy of a Chinese novel that I read about 2 years ago, but I don't remember the name, if you are copying, at least remove the Chinese name.