silent_reaper333

so chatgpt is a child right now? 😂😂

this story is already much better than last... I just hope you keep things close to reality (don't really want to dictate your story as author it's your right) but I believe building system and specially programming for computer can be annoying as hell ( if you want to make it system directly just give it a time skip it you want for reality touch) no need to be perfect with every feature at start, can be updated later on... last this is my biggest reason for dropping novel is mc developing god persona it gets freaking annoying to read any further after that make him op if you wish but create brothers not loyal followers that give story life 😁😁 thank you for writing such story ♥️

I get it but please it's humble request to give those world character their time too shine and respect.. as one man show always gets boring...

hey there author I have been following your story for quite some time and am enjoying it but I have this nagging feeling that you're making every other character besides mc one dimensional like there's a dude who's A rank and can't even feel E ranks strength when sung Jin woo starts and his strength is around C rank even then he was careful around A ranks and you're making him boss while he's normal human 🤷🏻‍♂️🥴 it kinda removes early on challenge from story and give it Chinese troope vibe where mc does something everyone just reacts 😓

hey author you've made great changes here in current story.... although the process of making PC, AI and OS is still fast but I guess it's with in reasonable range please don't make him king of the world before story starts I mean even Tony stark got started for real after he suffered some setbacks.... which was the real motivation for him I suggest that you give him reason for his drive that's what all human need to grow either good or bad otherwise if there's no drive no one will work 🤷🏻‍♂️ also make him original villains that are solely focus on our mc instead of mc going around messing with other heros villain, I mean I hope that you're mc is not a nanny or attention seeker that just messes with every villain just for sake of messing 😅 it's humanly tiring to do so keeping track of every bad guy like even tony with world most powerful ai and shield being most powerful organization don't just jumps around everywhere because it's not feasible also you can grow along with time like no need to introduce nano bots before time, heres the thing Howard stark was genius but he was limited by his time period which is factual thing.... 😁

idea is great no doubt!!! but execution is too painful to watch, like bro just one day wakes up and every thing goes on throttle, day one gets Omnitrix day 2 builds AI and comics, day 3 become world famous....... I mean it's 2004 when there's no social platform since MC build one himself, he didn't promote anything and everyone in world knows about his comics, like how?? plus just working on single project takes dozens of days for human and he built SYSTEM, AI AND A FREAKING OS in a single day???? 😅😅 I mean author you had like 3-4 year cushion before whole ironman thing, so you could have easily span this over next few years..... and then the hero thing I mean Gwen father is police officer he knows his daughters friend has bike that glow and that's the only one in newyork but when he spots another bike at crime scene he or anyone else connects dot like the world has gone dumbdumb 🤨

thank you so much 😁👍

hey if you don't mind can you please share raw name? 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

syansa? I'm not talking about those weird demonic techniques if you've seen gosu (techniques from the good side) they can easily change landscapes and all and from 4th ninja war and onwards only monsters can survive 🤷🏻‍♂️

great concept for your story but just so you know sand didn't attack uzumaki village (so you can still change settings if you want or make it an AU) xD also system is great and reasonable you cannot create ninjutsu out of thin air and even if you do high requirements of chakra makes it impossible for normal people to use that jutsu otherwise everyone in major villages can spam S level justu 🤷🏻‍♂️ so here's a suggestion like if you can make system come up with efficent chakra refining (as in spirit power) since you already did for body.. or you can even give it a martial arts vibe i mean imagine creating techniques similar to murim with chakra 🥹 anyways that's my opinion story is yours keep up the good work