Justin_Steiner
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Justin_Steiner6dRespondeu a LongSongGoldenThis story definitely has some consistency issues.
"Quick..." Madara sighed, seeing that there were no more of them alive and went to the nest, where he spat out more fire, destroying it. He took a spare sword and started cutting the necks of the burned creatures, but he didn't return immediately to the village, since his job was very quick and probably they would complain, already knowing this world, saying that his work was too easy and he shouldn't be paid the full amount.- Justin_Steiner1mthComentou
ewww
"Because I don't like them."detailIs It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in a Dungeon with Gate of Babylon?Anime e quadrinhos · XElenea - Justin_Steiner1mthComentou
Isn't this a translation? Even further, it's fanfiction. That makes it two steps removed from you even having any credit to it. If your motivation to translate is money and not spreading a story you enjoy, I suggest looking for something else to do.
I know many of you enjoy this novel, and I love it too. However, continuing a project that doesn't generate income is unsustainable. Currently, there's only one Patreon supporter, which isn't enough to make this viable for me. I hope you can support this novel. Have a nice day. - Justin_Steiner2mthComentou
This really is going to be an annoyance we constantly have to listen to throughout the entire story, isn't it?
However, swordsmanship was merely a hobby, while magic was Rozen's true pursuit. Besides, as mentioned before, even though it was a bit troublesome, Rozen could still use sword techniques with his current body. - Justin_Steiner2mthComentou
Is this going to be a constant thing? Because it's already gotten old.
"Stop nagging! Don't treat me like some barbarian! I... I rely on my intellect for a living!" - Justin_Steiner5mthComentouCh 116 The fierce Shizuka-sensei, and the surprised romcom protagonist
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I think the point is, it isn't her own requirement. She just basically loves unconditionally. Maybe? I don't know.
Except for Lala, the girls were actually quite troublesome. - Justin_Steiner7mthComentouCh 19 [19] Girl Consequences
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cringe
"Today, let me be your knight, Utaha." - Justin_Steiner7mthRespondeu a FortuneEternal
Of course you're going to get backlash for writing an insert fic then still focusing on the original MC. From what I understand, even when the POV switches, you still have Rudeus as an important part of the story, right? That's a recipe for disaster, especially considering what most people read inserts for and the demographic of this site.
- Justin_Steiner8mthComentou
Yea, that's it for me. Good luck with the story. I can point out a lot of things I'd consider negative, like your character being overall unlikable, or your incessant need to repeat yourself over and over again, but overall this has just been annoying to read.
Ch 10 The Emergence of the Entropy Touch - Justin_Steiner8mthComentou
Lightning. Thunder is the sound.
The thunder kept hitting him for a few minutes before vanishing. - Justin_Steiner9mthComentou
That's some early 2000's humor right there.
Rob: "If it was any other subject maybe there would be a better chance I could take you to some kingdom, but not even in hell do they want someone with such bad tastes and weird fetishes." - Justin_Steiner9mthComentou
I mean this girl was what, 16? I'd be more likely to pity her 'cause a girl like that doesn't usually have a good home life.
Este número foi suprimido. - Justin_Steiner9mthComentouCh 2 Chapter 2: Return from the Death
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I wish we could just stop giving an actual measurement. Leave it to the viewer and these arguments go away. "Wow, it's big!"There you go.
'Good thing I stopped it with magic before that happened, no woman would come near me after seeing anything bigger than this,' Adam still thought, that maybe even his current size is a little big for normal women. - Justin_Steiner10mthComentou
This is a crime
After a while, a blindfolded and bound girl was brought by Homura to Sagiri's door... - Justin_Steiner11mthComentou
Sometimes I wish people would replay how a conversation like this would actually sound before writing their dialogue.
"You know why I like competent and mature women?" Mikael asked rhetorically, his mood changing harshly once more. He loomed over her again; the intense look in his eyes captivated her. "My ideal is a woman I can have a serious talk with, intelligent enough to provide input and ideas. Then I make them into my mewling love slave. I like breaking them. That's one of the reasons I dislike mind control. It takes out all the challenges. The thrill of the hunt. Over months and years, I seduce and twist. Little things at first, you can't live without me by the end. Take you, for example."