After reading the chapters, it seems that the first chapter needed some polishing, the characters are good except they are confusing in the conversation moment. So, it was a good read. [img=recommend]

Thank you for the awesome review!

She will. Thank you.

Since it was just only chapter 1 , I cannot get the view of the world background that much and the story development , it was still on-going, however the quality was alright. Maybe if there are ten chapters then I can probably enjoy it. Just keep updating the book, go with your chapters, Author you are doing great! My low rates will be adjusted soon!

Well that was a good start, Fells cursing keeps the moment lively. [img=recommend] The plot itself was giving me that vibes of sadness, because some of the one-sided love would not end well or be together. Plus this book, could attract those bitter hearts too!

Yes, Sabi is a name 🤭

I tried to keep the mood on. I did not expect that you will like it~

Thank you for the review! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you so much for the honest review! [img=recommend]

Thank you for the review! I am glad you enjoyed it~[img=recommend]

I can see the future of me sleeping ~

Thank you very much!

Thank you for the review, reader [img=recommend]

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

The story plot is good, the characters are developing themselves by what the author wrote. There is not much going on aside from trying to kill, yet, it is interesting if there were more chapters to read on.

[img=recommend] It's a slow pace. Just enjoy your reading time.

Review Done. ........... .................

Reviewed. Done. [img=recommend]

Writing Quality: Since the book has just begun, I would like to say that this would be good for those slow pace readers. In my opinion, the way it started was good however, reading to much He got me...uhh. Maybe try to remove the he and make something out from it. The author focuses on what the person was doing which for some readers it would be...uninteresting. Still , some would like this kind of writing. Readers have different preferences so just keep on writing! We all grow by writing more and reading. Stability : Full stars for it since the author is active. Story Development/Character Design/World Background: Since the quality was slow, developments would also be slow. It takes patience. The characters world background was a blurry progress but it can be handled well in the upcoming updates. Character design , I can not picture out yet aside from being young and living in the orphanage. Lets just see where this goes. Job well done!

Writing and Development: This book has a clear idea of what the author wants however, there were a few info dump and redundancy of words. I suggest try to make it a conversation instead if that happens. and every chapter, there is a development but less hook. Character, Stability and Background: In my opinion, dayum I found it sad to know that I can not picture out the 3d character on the Female lead alright. I only got a glimpse of what Mushka looks like but not Franchette. It would be better if the author describe her first. *intense sobbing*. Now moving forward to the stability, the author manage to catch up on the chapters per week so it has no problem at all. In addition, the world background is nice starting from Luzon, or progresses after one chapter to another. It was a good read. Keep writing author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]