EdMakuKusune
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Amp?
Alayla, actually.
That recipe....pfft haha! I didn't write the whole ingredient! I'm sorry.
Hah? What?
LOL
First chap and it already has a goal. Very impressive.
FINALLY> I have read all of your recent chapters. You thought I abandoned your story? HAHAHAHAHA nope! I'll keep on reading. Well the names were so damn creative because it's based from their three lives. Writing quality is great. World background is great. The MC is mysterious as hecc and I love it!
Ok. There was originality and creativeness. Grammar seems a bit wrong on some cases. Characters are presented and described as the story goes on and I liked that. All in all your story is about to create a great future. Just don't stop till you finish it. That's all I could say basing from my level of criticism.
Very nice phrase
HAHAH. Fancy seeing you here. My fellow readers, you could also check his work out. He's story is also great.
A bit of misspell here sorry
So that it would make it feel new.