GrammarNazi69

Well, I just wanted to try this out. It may not happen for all I know. I just felt that MC getting a concept would be less invasive. Or maybe he could get something like knowledge from a subject of your guys’ interest too.

Feel free to point them out.

Not too sure what you mean here.

New. Hehe.

The rewrite is slow because I'm at university and working among other real life things. Everything's really hectic right now, so I don't have that much time to dedicate to this. I made a weekly upload schedule for this reason. I think it's slow, but I just can't speed it up any more. Sorry.

Hi, can you point them out for me? I'd love to improve this novel as much as I can.

I agree with your sentiment. In fact, I've already made some minute changes. 1) The story is already really good, so the changes I make will take place in later chapters since there is one plot hole I plan to fill. Also, I'm not certain whether or not I'll continue. 2) I'm torn. At the point the author stopped, literally anything could happen. Who knows if the author just took a hiatus like the Food Wars author did. 3) I've never written an original work before, so I don't know where I'd take the story beyond some fluff and lemons.

More stuff will be changing in future chapters, although it's gonna be minor. MC isn't gonna act out on his pervyness as much. Fnatic_Fan-san seemed to forget that memories are a thing, so MC isn't gonna like u know overtly do super questionable things. Celine isn't an idiot. If she used an ounce of brain, she could find red flags everywhere. Also, I'm personally not that into some of the later kinks, so they might be booted.

I'm gonna set the stopping point where the author set it for several reasons. 1) I don't know what the original author's intentions for the story to go since at the point in the story he stopped at, literally anything could happen. 2) I've not written any form of original content before. My inexperience in this department could inadvertently be a detrimental experience. Rather than having a great work slowly deteriorate, I'd like to keep this in a unblemished state, so to speak. 3) I can't in good conscience add on to something that originally someone else's and perhaps accidentally turn it into something that's mine. So yeah. Hope we can still enjoy this journey together.

I'll be doing my best to keep the original intent there, but there will be some changes, of course.