DesolateRipper
I can't stop reading. 👺
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he's not a villain for no reason
anything's a castle if you believe it in your heart, but this is probably the wrong type of Novel for that haha....
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They have the mindset of a disaster victim which would be fine in anything other than an apocalyptic situation.
beer is almost a meal in it's own right, you'd be surprised
your level of skill as a non native speaker is already impressive, so keep your chin up.
your level of skill as a non native speaker is already impressive
you should use more contractions, it would really benefit this FF and anything else you write. I'm, You're, I'll, will really help the flow, it can be a bit jarring the way it is now. an example would be like " I am sure it will be fine" vs " I'm sure it will be fine" or even " I'm sure it'll be fine" it can change the tone or even make the dialogue flow more smoothly and naturally
the development is not bad and I even enjoy it, however I feel some distance with this Novel. The progression of the plot in general has been rather fast and finer details somewhat glossed over, it's very condensed and I'd say it's a shame but the benefit is that you actually get to see progression but the price for it is there.
welp
hahaha I'm sorry but I'm dipping to find something at the very least decent